The proportions are great, and the shading is pretty good! I really like her outfits, and the angle at which the piece was drawn is very good.
However, I feel like the colors blue and purple almost completely dominate the piece. I'd suggest making the grass more green instead of blue, and the house perhaps a beige.
Also, I think Janessa's nose is drawn a bit big, and a little high up her face. I'd recommend making it on the lower part of her face instead of the middle.
But overall, this is a good piece! The foreshortening on her legs is fantastic, and her hair is really pretty! Well done!
The proportions are great, and the shading is pretty good!
I really like her outfits, and the angle at which the piece was drawn is very good.
However, I feel like the colors blue and purple almost completely dominate the piece. I'd suggest making the grass more green instead of blue, and the house perhaps a beige.
Also, I think Janessa's nose is drawn a bit big, and a little high up her face. I'd recommend making it on the lower part of her face instead of the middle.
But overall, this is a good piece! The foreshortening on her legs is fantastic, and her hair is really pretty! Well done!
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